Luna

[twilightstar]

Character

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Name:Luna

Age:16

Gender:Female

Pokemorph:All the evolved forms of Eevee.

Appearance:As a sixteen year old, she is a beautiful girl who has black hair and red eyes. She is wearing a black outfit with some spots of yellow on it as well. She wears a belt with many different kinds of balls just in chase she finds a pokemon that she like or loves.After that next to the pokeballs, there is a small pouch that has some supples if she gets hurt or her pokemon are injured.She is also wearing s skirt that has zigzag's on the bottom and there white and yellow, then the rest of her skirt is just plain black with her belt.

Her top is mostly black with yellow at the top.it fits her well and it matches the skirt that she is wearing.Her socks are long with black and white stripes that start at her feet, and then end at her knees.The shoes that she is wearing are mostly yellow with some black and red straps.They are great for climbing and running fast.She is also wearing gloves that are basically black with the outer sides where she slips her hands through, which are yellow all the way around her hand.Her hate is gray with a pokeball on the side, it's tides on her head so it would not fall off.She only takes it off when she is sleeping or in water.

Personality:She is never really shy around people, and she always shows off her pokemon to people. She just loves to meet new people and even their pokemon.Luna is always honest when it comes to friends, she will always try to hide what is bothering her and she will always act tough when she needs to be.She show Loyal to her friends and family, also, to her pokemon.Luna has compassion to her pokemon and other's it's not hard for her to understand ones view of their problems.

She has her independence when it comes to her own work, she does her work when it needs to be done. She has no problem with what she does. When it gets hard, she will take a break but get back to it after words.She loves physical challenge, where she can run or climb she will always accept a challenge.

History:Luna was born in The Physis Region. She had seen so many pokemon that she had seen. When she saw an Eevee, she fell in love with them.She told her father about them and that she wanted to become a train and collect eevees and other pokemon as well. After a few days her mother was killed by falling from a rock that somehow got pushed down. It was hard for Luna and her mother. Nomie, her mother was their for Luna for her saddened heart as well.

As she became older she started to talk with some other trains that came in from different places and then she saw an evolved eevee, a Vaporeon. She then knew what she really wanted, to become a trainer and later on, a breeder. She soon then started to know things about the pokemon and the big world out there. Some trainer said it was hard and you needed to work hard at it.

The day came to where she turned 16 and so she turned to her mother about it, her mother was sad, but yet happy that she wanted to be a trainer so she went out for a while and soon, made a friend, a friend with a pokemon and it was her best friend even when they both left home, she never really caught the Umberon it, just came to her.

Career:Trainer

The Daemon

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OK, what is A Daemon?!?!?!?!

Name:Twilightstar

Form (If settled):Not settled has 8 forms it likes

Favourite Form/s (If not settled):Eevee, Espeon, Umbreon, Jolteon, Vaporeon, Flareon, Glaceon, Leafeon

Appearance:Has to many to name all the pokemon it will turn into is above!

Personality:She can be very fun. She will turn into a eevee and ride of Luna's shoulder when she get's tired.

[Birdybot]

Okay, the character's fine, but before I can accept it we need to work on some things.

There are lots of grammar and spelling issues. There is a spell check button by the 'post reply' button, so please use it. Also, after a full stop or comma, you need a space. It's not that difficult.

All you've included in her appearance is how she dresses. If you're going to make her a Pokemorph of all the forms of Eevee, you're going to have to make a really long bio for me to accept it, and at the very least, include what Eevee-ness she has about her. Does she have ears? A tail? All Pokemorphs have Pokemon traits, so your character should have some too.

In the History, you need to put in how she became a Pokemorph.

Also, her daemon would have settled by now. A settled form is a fixed one- it cannot change any more. Since you put that you do not know what a daemon is, please click here and read it.

If you have any questions, for example what Pokemorphs are and so on, PM me and I'll explain. You could also check out some of the accepted profiles. This character has good potential, I wouldn't want to see it go to waste.

Lastly, and non-character related, your signuture stretches the page. Post in this thread if you would like me to make you a more suitable one, and also I could redo your avatar so it's nice and clear and non-JPG. That's a minor issue, you don't have to do anything about it if you don't want to.