Izzy the Pyress

[flameh]

Character

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Name: Izzy Harrington

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Pokemorph:

Appearance:
From; Photobucket

Izzy is about 5' 3" witha slim build. She has fiery red hair and eyes. She wears a short army green skirt and a white belly shirt. She wears long black tights with tan flats. A large tan bow rests on the front of her shirt. She wears a long orb necklace.

Personality: Izzy has fiery temper. She is extremely stubborn and independant. She refuses to rely on anyone for help. She is all about being her own person. She can be nice once you get through her shell. It takes time but it is possible. She can be a great friend once her shell has been cracked.

[glow=red,2,300]Likes;[/glow]
*Fire
*Red, green & white
*Ice, her Daemon

[glow=red,2,300]Dislikes;[/glow]
*Her brother, Alex
*Water types
*Blizzard, Aleax's pokemon

History: Izzy was born into a rich family. She was unwanted and unneeded. Her parents already had Edward, she was a mistake. Her brpther was their pride and joy. He was spoiled rotten she was lucky enough to get a new shirt, but all he had to say was shirt and off to the mall they went. When her brother left for his jorney, she spent 6 lonely years at home.

A few days after she met Flare, she was in her room playing with fire. Flare was a wild charmander that hung out around her place and she had become friends with it. He had brought out her love for fire. She set the place ablaze but escaped. Her parents died, which made her only love fire more. She despised her parents and the death made her happy. That day she set out for her journey. She met her brother several years later. They had a heated encounter where their feelings were set. She is now rivals with her brother.

Career: Trainer

The Daemon

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Name: Ice

Form (If settled): Charizard

Favourite Form/s (If not settled):
From; Suta Ratio

Ice is a smaller, delicate looking charizard. He's got icey blue eyes and a bright flame. He has large fangs and is powerful.

Personality: Ice is a strong willed daemon. He has a short fuze and will protect Izzy from anything. He settled as a charizard because it reflected her dominant fiery, short tempered side.

[Birdybot]

If I accepted this, it would only be Common, sorry. However, there's a reason why I'm not.

"A few days after she got Flare"
Who or what is Flare? You need to explain. More than just this sentance! Perhaps a paragraph on how she got it, and why and what it is. Also, if it's a Pokémon, you need to remember that you can't start out with a Pokémon already.

[Halofire]

And also, it would be great to credit where the images came from. Isn't that Charizard from Suta-Raito?

EDIT: Why yes it is... suta-raito.com/images/Charizard.gif

[flameh]

Modified

[Birdybot]

It's acceptable now with a Common rating. You can improve by putting in more detail. For example, I always find playing main events in the history in character makes it longer, and the only thing in your personality is about her being stubborn. Does she have a soft side? What does she love and hate?

[flameh]

Well it says shes nice in her personality.

She can be nice once you get through her shell. It takes time but it is possible. She can be a great friend once her shell has been cracked.

I'll add some likes and dislikes too.

[Birdybot]

Just take a look at some of the accepted characters, and you'll see what other people have done.